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Grant, Mira: Deadline

Deadline (2011)
Written by: Mira Grant
Genre: Horror
Pages: 624 (Kindle)
Series: Book Two (Newsflesh Trilogy)

Why I Read It: Mira Grant's Feed was one of the major surprises for me last year. We read it for my October 2011 book club, and I feel in love with the book pretty hard. So hard that the question wasn't whether or not I was going to buy the sequel, but whether or not I'd get the hardcopy or the Kindle. I decided on the Kindle because my tiny hands are protesting thick books more and more (which is the reason I still haven't finished Wise Man's Fear), and I gobbled down the book the instant I was able.

The premise: ganked from BN.com: Shaun Mason is a man without a mission. Not even running the news organization he built with his sister has the same urgency as it used to. Playing with dead things just doesn't seem as fun when you've lost as much as he has.

But when a CDC researcher fakes her own death and appears on his doorstep with a ravenous pack of zombies in tow, Shaun has a newfound interest in life. Because she brings news-he may have put down the monster who attacked them, but the conspiracy is far from dead.

Now, Shaun hits the road to find what truth can be found at the end of a shotgun.


Spoilers, yay or nay?: OMG YAY. I can't talk about this book without spoilers, not if I want to be coherent. But don't worry, if you haven't read it yet and just want a non-spoilery reason why you SHOULD read the book, skip to "My Rating" and you'll be fine. Promise. :) But please, do yourself a favor and DO NOT SPOIL YOURSELF. Read the book, and then come back, and all will be good.



I think the most important thing to note here is how you feel about this book greatly depends on how you like and/or connect to the characters. Not just Shaun, who's narrating this time around, but also George, who shows up as a voice in Shaun's head and sometimes, shows up as an outright hallucination. I know there were a lot of people in the book club who couldn't connect with George, and may find Shaun's reliance on her grating, and then there's readers who couldn't transition into Shaun's narrative, which makes this book a bit problematic, yes?

Me, I was happy as a clam. I loved George and I loved the risk Grant took with Feed, and when we transitioned to Shaun's voice, I was in such shock that in a way, it worked. I couldn't keep reading the same narrative voice after Shaun shot her, so getting the raw emotionalism of Shaun was a welcome transition for me, because after George died, I was feeling pretty raw too.

I'll admit from the start I was worried that Grant had established a pattern. I kept expecting that we'd get a new narrator by the end (we did) because Shaun would get killed. In fact, I was all set for Becks to take over at the end to continue the mission, and boy, oh boy, was I ever surprised.

But I'll get back to that.

I enthralled the moment I started reading. We started out with a similar scene: a crazy Irwin poking a zombie with a stick, and then the tale goes forth from there. We learn that really, Shaun's not been able to deal with his grief of losing George, and it was fascinating to see how George-in-his-head was treated. At one point in the narrative, I honestly wondered if we'd learn that there was something special about Kellis-Amberlee that allowed Shaun to actually really hear George, that he wasn't crazy or losing his mind, but really hearing her. That made for an interesting way to look at those scenes: was Shaun really crazy, or was there something different in him that allowed him to be haunted so? I really wondered when Shaun had his first real breakdown in the van, when Becks said she thought she heard VOICES, plural, not a voice. Was Shaun speaking as George, or was George really there? Or was it a typo? Whatever the case, the fact that Becks heard PLURAL voices makes it delightfully creepy.

I'll be honest: I didn't take a lot of notes here. And half of the notes I did take were of the "holy shit!" variety. The other half of the notes were musing over the government conspiracy, so let's talk about that a bit.

While I was thoroughly engaged, I'll admit I had trouble wrapping my arms around the idea that the CDC and those in similar positions around the world were intentionally preventing humanity from finding a natural immunity to the Kellis-Amberlee. At first, and this is because I was reading so quickly, I thought that the new strands being introduced were strands engineered by the government and released to the population, that this would keep going until they found a strand humanity wouldn't develop an immunity to via reservoir conditions. I seem to remember walking away with this conclusion, but please, if your memory is fresher and if you're more willing to look it up, let me know if I'm on crack. At any rate, I'm all about a government conspiracy, but a GLOBAL conspiracy? That's a wee bit tough to swallow, though I'm waiting to see what answers are revealed in the third book before making my final judgment.

The one thing I'm not sure about was the whole second outbreak at the end of the book. After everything that happened at the CDC, I was convinced that somehow, this new outbreak was indeed a product of the government, and that somehow, the CDC was going to pin this outbreak on Shaun and his team. Yet by time I finished the book, I was given the impression that may not be the case at all. If it is the case, talk about maniacal on the part of the government: that's a nasty mutation of the virus, isn't it? If it isn't the case, this outbreak sort of comes out of left field, and I really hope the third book dives into what happened and why if at all possible. And given where our narrators are (yes, I said narrators), I think it's highly likely we'll learn if this second outbreak is man-made or naturally occurring.

I'm still coming to grips with Shaun's complete and total immunity. Clearly, this will be explored more in book three, but it was startling because I was so expecting for him to die when Grant just pulled the rug out from under me. Yet, it makes sense in a weird sort of poetic justice way. Between George and Shaun, it was Shaun who always thought he'd go first, and now not even the virus will kill him.

Let's talk George, on many levels. First, having her voice in Shaun's head worked for me. Second, I was jarred and startled when we learned that there was a chance, just a chance, she could've recovered from amplification on her own. I was about as sick as Shaun when we learned that, because it was Shaun who had to pull the trigger. I kept thinking back, about how any other author would've found a way to keep George alive in the last book and make this book be about the discovery of how George could survive without turning, you know? But in reality, the CDC knew she'd failed her test, so there's no way she could've gotten out of that van alive.

Yet.

When we learned that Kelly had a clone of herself, I filed away under "Oh, that's neat," knowledge, and then at one point while reading, I entertained the thought of George somehow becoming a clone. I dismissed it right away, because how would that clone have George's memories or personality, you know? So when the final chapter hit, and George was alive, I was completely floored. Floored because at first, I thought she really didn't die, that Shaun didn't really kill her.

But he did. There's no getting around it. George really died. And if you take a look at the sneak peak for the next book, you learn what I already suspected: the George at the end is a clone of the original.

My guess? The third book will alternate points of view between Shaun and George.

I can imagine some people won't be happy with this development. I'm still wondering if this clone diminishes the impact of the original in Feed. I haven't decided, and I don't expect I will decide until I can read the third and final book and look at this trilogy as a whole. For now, I'm quite happy munching on my "holy shit!" reaction to the whole thing, and that's good.

But speaking of George and Shaun: we talked a LOT in our discussion of Feed whether or not the two of them were biological siblings, and whether or not they had sexual relations or if they simply had a really unhealthy dependence on each other.

We get answers.

Yes, their relationship was unhealthy and screwed up. Grant makes that very clear, but I think what's also clear as that both George and Shaun are products of the world they were raised in. So I'm cool with that.

No, they were NOT biologically related. They were born around the same time and have the same color of hair, which made it easy to pass them off as twins. BUT THEY WERE NOT BIOLOGICALLY RELATED.

And here's another "oh shit!" moment for me, after Shaun slept with Becks, when he whispers goodnight to George. The chapter following that little slip all but confirmed that he and George had a sexual relationship, and honestly? That delights me to no end.

I had to ask myself why today, while figuring out what I was going to say for this review. In the first book, I appreciated the fact we had no romance and a close relationship between siblings that bordered on being super-weird. You'd think that this confirmation that they weren't really related, that they were sleeping together, would blow my appreciation out of the water. It didn't, and the reason for that is that I absolutely love screwed up relationships, and the fact we learn this information after George is dead helps keep it in context. We know we, as readers, won't be subjected to a sexual encounter, and that makes it easier to marvel and freak out over the revelation.

How that will change in the third book, however, is beyond me. I'm wondering if the clone of George will allow Shaun the closure he needs to put her death behind him, or if they'll never meet ever again, with the reader being the only one knowing the truth, or what. I wouldn't put anything past Grant, which is one of the reasons I'm looking forward to the third book so much.

Because at this point, she's more than earned my trust as a reader. I think most, if not all, of the major complaints (unless you just didn't like the characters) people had in Feed are addressed here, and they're addressed in such a way you know it's an organic part of the story, not just the author plugging in a bit to respond to critics of the first book. I can't stress how happy this book made me, and while I'm a little leery of the ending, I definitely can't wait to see where Grant is taking us.

Some moments that stood out:

" . . . Dave and I, we were doing this . . . this weird circling thing, like we needed to figure out every single line of the script before we could even start the movie. I knew, and he knew, and we didn't do a damn thing about it." She sniffled. A very small sound that seemed loud in the sudden silence of the room. "It's like we thought everything had to be perfect, or it wouldn't work. Like it was a story."


I love this moment, because I think it hits the nail on the head when it comes to how people approach romantic relationships and why we wait. The movie/story bit makes perfect sense to me as a writer too, and I just love the way this is articulated here.

Then there's a more humorous side, courtesy of Dr. Shannon L. Abbey:

DO NOT TAUNT THE OCTOPUS (from a t-shirt)

Best wishes, and stay the fuck away from me. (from an email)

I love her!



My Rating: Couldn't Put It Down

So here's the thing: there are roughly six parts in this book (five and an epilogue, if you want to be technical), and there wasn't a single part of the book that didn't have me going "OMG!" or "Oh, shit." To say this book kept me on the edge of my seat is an understatement, but instead of gushing, I want to step back a bit and look at it from a different angle: one of the things I really admire about this sequel is how Grant is answering a lot of questions people had about the first book, Feed, though when you're reading, you don't feel like she just stuck the answers in because she felt she had to. No, the answers read like they've always been part of the story. Want to learn more about the amplification and the Kellis-Amberlee virus? Check. We learn a lot, far more than I expected. Want to know what the deal really was between Shaun and George? Check. Did you feel like the villain in Feed was just a little too black-and-white obvious for your taste? Don't worry, you learn why.

I'm not saying you'll be satisfied with the answers Grant gives you, but I point this out because by way of construction, Grant's got my complete and total trust in her story-telling capability, and I firmly believe that she knows what she's doing with this story and why. I should note that this isn't a self-contained novel by any means: it's the middle book of a trilogy, which means it's imperative that you read Feed first, and that you won't get any real resolution to the overall scheme of things until the third book is over. And that's okay. Deadline ends at a great cliffhanger, and by time you get there, you may be like me and are so overwhelmed (in a good way) with everything that's happened that you need a break to process it all. The only downside is that for a break, I only needed an hour at most, but I have to wait until this time next year for the final installment, Blackout.

The point: whether you liked or loved Feed, I think Deadline more than delivers. But this is not a proper starting point, so run, don't walk, to get your hands on Feed, and then get back to me once you're caught up, okay? :)

Cover Commentary: I can't say that I've ever been a HUGE fan of these covers, but they are eye-catching, and I am fond of teal. Really, that's all I can say. :)

Next up: Embassytown by China Miéville
Good timing then! I hear from people who read WWZ first that the prefer it to FEED, but since I read FEED first it'll be interesting to see my take on WWZ. :)
I'm not big on zombies either, but these books seem to hit the spot for readers like us! With you feeling meh about FEED, what made you decide to give DEADLINE a try?
I am clearly going to have to re-read, because I did not get that Shaun and Georgia had a sexual relationship. I certainly did get that they were married-couple close, which was why Shaun never had to deal with dating and all the complications involved with that. He had all his emotional needs met by George, and never looked elsewhere. But did they have sex? I don't know.
Are you talking about rereading FEED or DEADLINE? If it's FEED, the possibility of a sexual relationship was much debated in my book club discussion; now if you're referring to DEADLINE, I'd love to know how you interpreted a certain scene!
I did not join the book club until December, I think? So I had not read the comments about FEED. I will have to do that. :)

So maybe I need to re-read both books, but in the comment above , I was talking about re-reading DEADLINE. Which scene are you referring to specifically?
Okay, cool, I didn't want to spoil anything.

The scene after Shaun has sex with Becks, and then after it's over, he says goodnight to George. That could easily be construed either way, though it's a bit weird to think that after he had sex and someone was tucking him in, he'd assume it was George if they'd never had a sexual relationship. Then again, he was zonked out.

But then when he's apologizing to Becks, that whole section, especially the "But she's your sister" remark all but confirmed, to me, that George and Shaun had a sexual relationship. Then again, I was really looking for it, and if I hadn't been, maybe I wouldn't have read the sections that way.

What was your take?
Feed is the most amazing book I have read in a LONG time, I was utterly gripped by both hands right from the first page. It was the most riveting, gripping, brutal and honest story I have ever read.

It was astonishing - note I am not a particular zombie fan but I am a Mira Grant/Seanan McGuire fan so I made the effort to reserve at the library and so glad I did

Looking forward to Deadline :) its on reserve as well

I didnt read the spoilers but the comment about sex with Shaun/Georgia - they werent related to each other from memory, but I never got any vibe of that in Feed either
The sexual vibe was something very much debated in my book club discussion, so I'll be interested in your take on DEADLINE once you finish it. :) Be sure to come back to chat once you do!
I devoured this book the day it came out - and loved, loved, *loved* it!

When we learned about clones, I also thought "gee, I wonder if this will come back and somehow George will return" - but like you, I dismissed the possibility, because we didn't get any sense that a clone would be anything more than a genetic copy - there wasn't any discussion of retrieving the donor's personality or experiences.

That is only one of the big questions that I'm eagerly anticipating in the next book - the day I finished reading it, was the day the author finished the first draft of Blackout - so sad to think we have to wait another year!

I really hate having to wait. The last time, it wasn't bad, because I read the book in the fall and didn't have long until this one came out. But now, oy!
I was a little apprehensive of reading your review. I was worried that you wouldn't like it (I don't know why) and I really wanted you to like it. I loved it, maybe not as much as Feed, but love it I did. Shaun whispering to Becks just before falling to sleep had me jumping in my seat squealing 'omg' like a 12 year old. I loved the Shaun and George moments even when Shaun was at his most crazy. And talking about Georgia, I'm glad she featured in Deadline as much as she did. I really felt her presence.

I've heard some complaints that there was too much re capping but I found that really helpful as I couldn't get my little head around it the first time.

I really can't wait for Blackout and I may even read Feed and Deadline again in a few months. Are there any other zombie books you can recommend? I now have a taste (heh) for zombies. I'm really Warm Bodies right now and it's a little different
The re-capping didn't bother me at all either. It kind of reinforced what I'd already read that I read too fast to begin with!

Let's see: for July's book club, we're reading WORLD WAR Z, which I hear is THE zombie book, so you're welcome to join us there. Beyond all of this, though, I've not sought out much zombie fiction. However, you may want to check out Carrie Ryan's YA trilogy, starting with THE FOREST OF HANDS AND TEETH, and then there's Cherie Priest's CLOCKWORK CENTURY series, and you can mix and match those books but between BONESHAKER and DREADNOUGHT, the latter is my favorite. Still, BONESHAKER did come first!

What else... I swear, there was a period where everything I picked up had zombies in some form or fashion, but now I can't remember what's what! :)
I am looking forward to this book so much! I loved "Feed" more than WWZ, even though I'd read WWZ first. I skipped your spoiler section for now, but I will come back to comment more once I read "Deadline"! :)
Oh, good! So glad to hear someone liking FEED more than WWZ. I've often heard the opposite, so this makes me happy.

Please come back when you've read DEADLINE and join in the discussion!
And I totally missed the condom commentary, so good catch!

As far as the conspiracy goes, I'm waiting to see how everything wraps up in BLACKOUT. Right now things definitely feel loose, but I'm hoping it's the nature of the overall story, you know? We'll see!

Her urban fantasy has EXCELLENT world-building, and she's gritty there too. Definitely give it a shot. I will say that personally, I wasn't too keen on it at first despite the great things the books have to offer, but fell in love with the series when reading book three.
I read this book in a day. Then threw it across the room and yelled "MIRA! THAT'S NOT FAIR! WHY DO I HAVE TO WAIT A YEAR FOR YOU TO EXPLAIN YOURSELF!"

Then I got into a debate with a friend over whether George is a clone, whether George was reconstructed, or whether Shaun has finally gone completely around the bend and just thinks he's George.

Good times.
When I first got to that end, I thought Shaun had been betrayed and was at the CDC, but then I wondered why on Earth there was commentary about his eye condition. Shaun suddenly having a major break and thinking he's George is an interesting one, and I'd put nothing past Grant, but we'll see where this goes!
My issues with the major break theory is that "George" seems to think her body is conforming. I suppose if Shaun is balmy enough to think he's George, then he's balmy enough to rock some very serious body-dismorphia...but still.

It is an interesting theory none the less and I would not have thought of it without his prompting.
Ooh, interesting debate! I'd love to have been there for that one. Also, I felt the same way at the end of Deadline about having to wait another year. I was on a bus when I finished it, so I had to sit quietly and stew silently lest I be thrown off and had to walk the rest of the fifteen miles to work.
You might remember I had a lot of issues with Feed, despite liking the author and her style a lot. I was lucky enough to pick a copy of Deadline up at BEA so I plan to read it. It sounds like there would be a lot more action suited to my tastes and I'm willing to give the series another shot! Thanks for the review :)
I loved this and can't wait for the last book.

My reading of the CDC machinations and the resevoir conditions was the same as yours.

I would also like to see if the change in spread of the virus relates to that or is natural.

I liked World War Z, but I definitely prefer Feed and Deadline.
Glad I'm not crazy, then! :)

And yay for someone else preferring these books to WWZ! Not to say I won't like WWZ, but so many people proclaim how genius it is that I worry. :)
Just like you, I was preparing for Becks to be the narrator in Blackout (and now expect it to alternate between Shaun and George) and was also waiting to find that the reason Shaun was hearing/seeing George was KA related. Nah, he's just good and crazy! lol I didn't, however, feel the confirmation of their relationship necessarily implied anything sexual (not that I would be against it) so much as it confirmed a sort of tunnel vision where he only had eyes for George. A requited longing with a deep, emotional connection and likely full of consoling embraces, but I won't assume much more unless it's otherwise spelled out for me. heh

I took the CDC and other scientists playing with KA mutations as a means of trying to understand it to begin with, in hopes of finding a cure. The horrifying part was the idea that they were indeed unleashing it to, typically, small areas to 'test' the results. That's what I took from it, at least. And it also seemed to me that those with reservoir conditions that were being killed off took place before these new virus mutations hit, though they never did clarify who was doing this and why, beyond wanting to hide the 2-in-10,000 chance of them surviving amplification. I got the feeling that there was more to it than that... possibly. Hopefully this will be cleared up in the last book, just as many great things carried over from the first book into the second.

In your Feed review you mentioned how "certain repetitions of information can get tedious," which I didn't notice at the time, but I definitely saw that in Deadline. Every mention of Buffy had to talk about just how awesome she was and I think I started groaning every time the kill chute design was mentioned while they were in the Portland CDC, to name a few, but I wasn't entirely turned off by this either. I had the hardest time with most of the medical mumbo-jumbo - either I was always slow on the uptake (which I admit as a definite possibility) or each new discovery was done in the exact same way: drawn out until the very end of the conversation, or later, before finally being spelled out for the reader. I always felt like the slow kid playing catch up. I know part of this is because of Shaun's limited knowledge and getting the story through his eyes, but it seemed like there were a few times where we got reactions to the new development, even Shaun's, before we were finally let in on the secret.

I think getting lost in some of this medical stuff killed just a little bit of the fun for me, but all in all I loved it nearly as much as Feed and especially love how it altered some of what we knew from the first book.

Can't believe we have to wait a whole year for the next one!
Just finished reading Deadline. Mind officially blown. I'm a little leery about the resurrection of George (via clone), but if anyone can pull off this level of stuntwriting, Mira/Seanan can. It is definitely going to be difficult to wait all the way until next year to read Blackout.*

In in a book full of highlights (which is hard to do as a middle-of-the-trilogy installment), I think the part that blew my mind the most was the big (non)reveal of the actual nature of Shaun & George's relationship. I love that she told you everything through the lens of the night with Becks & its aftermath, thereby completely avoiding a situation of gratuitous squick. Yes, she tackled the incest question head-on, but with admirable subtlety. I'm still not convinced that George & Shaun went all the way physically, but it may not matter. They certainly filled that emotional niche for each other, which is why nobody else had (has?) a chance beyond a consequence-laden one night stand. George's resurrection also raises some fascinatingly soapy reflection on where things might go now that she has a body again (& Mahir is both in the US & his marriage is at best on shaky footing).

I'll be interested to see how I react to WWZ, as a relative non-fan of the zombie genre....

* May need to dive into some Toby action to tide me over.
One of the other commenters said they feel the whole condom discussion sealed the deal regarding the question whether or not they slept together. I'd totally overlooked that, but in hindsight, yeah. That was a great moment overall, and handled wonderfully. I do wonder, at this point, if Shaun's going to be able to move on, especially if he doesn't view the cloned George as the REAL George. If they do meet, what will the George in his head say?
I noticed the condom commentary, but I still don't think it necessarily means that it was George that induced Shaun's need for condoms. There's a point in Feed (which I do not have ready access to at the moment) where George talks about Shaun's relationships. I remember it suggesting that there had been other girls, none of them overly successful, but with the subtext that they were sufficiently successful to at least figure out the mechanics. That very same passage also may be the basis for my having the impression that George died "unconsummated," as it were. Possibly combined with some stuff from George's final post & a conversation that Mahir & Shaun have in the vicinity of the funeral....

Which points up another thing I continue to love about this series: the psychological consequences are real. The society they live in & their life experiences have a measurable & ongoing effect on how they feel. It leads to some seriously weird headspace, but it's weirdness that makes sense given the circumstances.
Oh, this discussion is delightful! I definitely look forward to re-reading this series one day and really looking at all the possible and potential clues once I know all the answers! Who knows what Blackout will give us?

But YAY to the psychological consequences. There's a disturbing number of books that simply don't DEAL with that, you know?
I hate it when books ignore or gloss over the psychological consequences. Someone dies, people are affected. Shit hit the fan in a big way, people are affected. It may vary from person to person, but the marks are there. On the surface you may go on like always, but underneath, you'll never be the same again.
That's a huge problem is urban fantasy as a whole, which this book isn't, but a lot of UF heroines need some serious therapy and they aren't getting it.
It's been a while since reading, but my understanding of the virus is that EVERYONE has it, but being bitten causes you to amplify, which turns you into a zombie. Dying also does this. There's also a fear of spontaneous amplification, which is why people are constantly tested.

The whole hydration thing you mention I don't remember. :-/
I'm not saying you'll be satisfied with the answers Grant gives you, but I point this out because by way of construction, Grant's got my complete and total trust in her story-telling capability, and I firmly believe that she knows what she's doing with this story and why.

nodnodnod. She has a very firm grip on the wheel and no matter how close to the cliff she drives and even if it looks like we're about to go right off the road, I trust her to keep it steady and grounded. I'm willing to suspend my disbelief and ignore seeming factual errors with her writing in a way I won't with other authors, which is a testament to just how kickass and solid her writing is.

The only downside is that for a break, I only needed an hour at most, but I have to wait until this time next year for the final installment, Blackout.

I know! It's not fair to make us wait that long!
Thanks for commenting. This is the rare series that caught me by surprise and utterly engaged me. Looking forward to the final installment (finally!).